I'm just now caught up so I haven't commented on any other chapters so here we go....
Very interesting storyline. I enjoy future fics and this is a great idea! So far I think you've got the right combination of details and plot that paint a really nice picture for the reader! Nicely done! I'm excited to read more!
(I know your EVEE isn't the EVE from WALL-E but that's all I can imagine when I read that robot name! teehee. Sorry just had to share that!)
Ah, that's alright - THANKS FOR COMMENTING NOW! :D
Thanks muchly, I've been trying my arse off trying not do disappoint anyone and trying not to give away whats happening. NAAAAAW! you're too kind *blush lblushslbl* yes my keyboard skills are pretty good 8)
(I haven't even seen WALL-E yet, but I wanna D'; gld you shared! you can just visualise that robot in place of mine if you like xD)
Wow, I don't even know how to answer that question... you're too intuitive! :D!
There's always time for him to do that later. He could pull on the spandex and fly through the room, scooping Jared up on his way and go crashing through a window... that could happen... seriously
WOw... it's gets better every time. At least now we got the last important player (Ja)red (yeah I NOTICED) alive and kicking, so to speak. I wonder if he developed any untowards higher brain functions after brain tumor and six hundred years of icy sleep... after all, he did something like telepathical intercom with the nice little tin lady, didn't he?? EHEHEhee... yeah, I can't wait for the next one!! Cat
hey thaaaaanks *blush blush* Are you sure the red he was reffering to was his name? Are you? Huh? ARE YA?! (It could be but Im just testing... or am i...?) Hey sweet! You picked up on that! AWESOME! I was hoping a few would... yaaaaaay! C:
yeah, I pick up on anything and everything, and what I miss is picked up by my best friend, unfortunately she can't afford to read WIP's so she's not on at the moment, but I'm pretty sure I got the most important things by myself this time Cat
Wow. Was EVEE repeating what she heard Jared say or was she reading his mind. Really interesting. It's very exciting waiting for the two men to see each other as more than a stranger and an ancient experiment.
The second one. YES! I was hoping you'd pick up on that! mission accomplished *high five* i'm so glad that you're liking the way that it's coming along - it's getting harder to write each time i swear...
Fabulous chapter. You have my curiousity tweaked for sure after this. Now this really has me wondering what Richmond was talking about when he said Jared was perfect. Did he make it so Jared can read the machines? Or does Evee somehow recognise Jared? Hmmmm. I love Jensens thoughts through this chapter. Jensen thinks like a person who spends alot of time with his own thoughts for company. You do such a great job of showing that.
AHH THANK YOU! :D I don't know how to answer your questions without giving it all away, but you're throwing some good predictions out that's for sure.
:'D Thanks for all the flattery - IT MAKES ME FEEL SPECIAL!@!@ I really don't need to type in caps all the time do I? D': thank you so much for keeping up with the story! :D!
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Very interesting storyline. I enjoy future fics and this is a great idea! So far I think you've got the right combination of details and plot that paint a really nice picture for the reader! Nicely done! I'm excited to read more!
(I know your EVEE isn't the EVE from WALL-E but that's all I can imagine when I read that robot name! teehee. Sorry just had to share that!)
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:D
Thanks muchly, I've been trying my arse off trying not do disappoint anyone and trying not to give away whats happening. NAAAAAW! you're too kind *blush lblushslbl*
yes my keyboard skills are pretty good 8)
(I haven't even seen WALL-E yet, but I wanna D'; gld you shared! you can just visualise that robot in place of mine if you like xD)
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you're too intuitive! :D!
There's always time for him to do that later. He could pull on the spandex and fly through the room, scooping Jared up on his way and go crashing through a window...
that could happen... seriously
thanks for keeping up with the story
:D! :D!
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EHEHEhee... yeah, I can't wait for the next one!!
Cat
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Are you sure the red he was reffering to was his name? Are you? Huh? ARE YA?! (It could be but Im just testing... or am i...?)
Hey sweet! You picked up on that! AWESOME! I was hoping a few would... yaaaaaay! C:
thanks so much for keeping up with the story!
:D!
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Cat
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Looking forward to the next chapter eagerly.
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i'm so glad that you're liking the way that it's coming along - it's getting harder to write each time i swear...
thanks for keeping up with the story! :D! :D!
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I love Jensens thoughts through this chapter. Jensen thinks like a person who spends alot of time with his own thoughts for company. You do such a great job of showing that.
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I don't know how to answer your questions without giving it all away, but you're throwing some good predictions out that's for sure.
:'D
Thanks for all the flattery - IT MAKES ME FEEL SPECIAL!@!@
I really don't need to type in caps all the time do I? D':
thank you so much for keeping up with the story!
:D!
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