H50 fic: Perfect

Apr 23, 2012 20:57

Title: Perfect
Characters/Pairings: Grace, Steve/Danny, Rachel
Rating: PG
Genre: slash, angst, future!fic
Word Count: 1,348
Warnings/Spoilers: None that I can think of.
Disclaimer: I own nothing, just having fun.
Author's Notes: Written for the 'Wealth & Poverty' square for my angst_bingo card, located here.

Beta'd by ranereins.

Summary: It's Grace's sixteenth ( Read more... )

steve/danny, hawaii five-0, fic, angst, slash, angst_bingo, grace

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Comments 16

ranereins April 24 2012, 01:59:15 UTC
Love it! Especially the ending... awww!

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sgflutegirl April 24 2012, 02:03:32 UTC
Thank you so much! :)

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simplyn2deep April 24 2012, 02:16:27 UTC
Danny's a great father and that was very mean of Rachel to do that

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sgflutegirl April 24 2012, 02:19:10 UTC
He really is, and it totally was.

Thank you! :)

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kitmerlot1213 April 24 2012, 02:42:37 UTC
This was just lovely!

The father/daughter bond that Danny and Grace have is just beautiful and I don't think Rachel was trying to show how much money she and Stan can lavish on Grace but rather, she's tryng to compete with Grace's bond with her Danno.

She didn’t mind it really, but she was getting older and she had already had a talk about him calling her that in front of her friends. I love it when children pull their parents aside to give them "a talk."

Great job on this :) :)

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sgflutegirl April 24 2012, 02:50:41 UTC
Thank you!! :)

I think you're right about Rachel.

I had a nice giggle while I was writing the part about the talk. Hehe

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alwaysateen April 24 2012, 03:14:30 UTC
Very nice. When parents learn that loving their child is not a competition, everything is better. :) Love is the best gift you can give and no money can't buy that...

Very nice story, I'm so proud of Grace for understanding Danny's POV and loving him even more for it. :)

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sgflutegirl April 24 2012, 03:21:22 UTC
Thank you so much!! :)

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embroiderama April 24 2012, 11:08:28 UTC
Aw, Grace is so sweet here, and I love the domestic Steve and Danny.

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sgflutegirl April 24 2012, 16:43:51 UTC
Thank you so much!!

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