H50 fic: Back From the Brink

Dec 10, 2011 00:12

Title: Back From the Brink
Characters/Pairings: Steve/Danny, Chin
Rating: NC-17
Genre: angst, fluff
Word Count: 2,223
Warnings/Spoilers: Spoilers for episode 2x10 Ki'ilua, and 2x11 Pahele. Sexual situation, and bad language.
Disclaimer: I own nothing, just having fun.
Author's Notes: Part 7 of the Love Letter 'verse.
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steve/danny, hawaii five-0, fic, angst, slash, spoilers, fluff

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crzymm3 December 10 2011, 16:10:48 UTC
This Is such a great story. I love how Danny just being there helps pull Steve out of himself. The sex scene was awesome for your first time.
I really hope you can write another. I love this series.

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sgflutegirl December 10 2011, 17:11:09 UTC
Thank you! :)

I was really nervous about the sex scene.

I have a feeling there will be more at some point.

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sgflutegirl December 11 2011, 21:33:46 UTC
I do too!! :)

Thank you!

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navyvet90 December 11 2011, 03:23:13 UTC
Oh, Steve. So fortunate he has Danny to help pull him back and just be there for him. It's so much better when you know you aren't alone. He might have a ways to go, but this was definitely a turning point. Telling Danny he needed him and admitting he needed to talk to someone was huge. The sex scene was realistic and emotional. Excellent job on that!
I loved that Steve wrote 'I love you' in his note to Danny.
Ending it there would totally work, too, though I am (not so secretly) hoping there will be more to the story. :-)
Wonderful work!
*hugs*

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sgflutegirl December 11 2011, 21:41:09 UTC
Thank you so much!! :D

I was really nervous about the sex scene.

I have a feeling there will be more. :)

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destielwinchi December 11 2011, 03:55:46 UTC
let me tell you, if this is the end of the story I can already die in peace.

It's beautiful.

Now I get to translate, because even I do not start with the visit of Chin.

Sorry my bad English, I'm half asleep. XD

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sgflutegirl December 11 2011, 21:41:51 UTC
Thank you so much!! :)

No worries!

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teddibear December 11 2011, 10:52:45 UTC
Oh that was a lovely conclusion to a lovely series. Nice job on the sex scene too. Very real and tender. Just what each needed. Love the bit about "scary SEAL mode" and how lost Steve got. Of course he needs his Danno to bring him back. He will always need his Danno. And I love that you ended it where it started, with a love letter.

Lovely work hun :)

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sgflutegirl December 11 2011, 21:44:56 UTC
Thank you!! :)

I knew this one would end with a letter, I just didn't know what would be in it till I got there.

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