Fic: Aleatoric Life 6/25: Tremolando

[sgatlantislight]

Title: Aleatoric Life 6: Tremolando
Author: SGAtlantisLight
Characters: McKay, Sheppard, Beckett, Corrigan, Halling, Zelenka
Relationships: Beckett/McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG-13, though the series as a whole is NC-17
Warnings: Mention of non-con, major character whumpage, possible suicide threat, language.
Spoilers: Mention of Season 2 episode

Comments

[domster07]

I have never wished for a computer to be fixed as quickly as I have yours-sorry to hear it died. It's crap, I empathize.

Back to the story. Yay, it's back! Carson and H/C-words can not express...Your writing style beckons me to read all the words-no skipping. And I reread it and still get something new out of it. Greatness.

I feel for them all. The loss of control they all feel, the fear and helplessness.

Can't wait for the next chapter-call me impatient.

[sgatlantislight]

Thanks. It's been interesting writing a H/C where Carson was the one (mostly) needing the comfort rather than giving it because John and Rodney are just such... guys, if you know what I mean.

Aleatoric Life

[haggitha]

Yessss!! I was pure dead chuffed to see another two chapters of this story.
I'm kinda worried about John though, the other two men are cracking but the sighns are more visible and thats easier to address in the long run..John though? he's hurting deep somewhere inside and if he doesn't find help his guilt is going to destroy him me thinks...
Please hurry and post the next chapters....
::sighs:: Haggis's are not renound for their patience and this haggis is getting so upset about the plight her favorite three men are in atm.
Here is hoping pleading works ;)
huggles
haggy

Re: Aleatoric Life

[sgatlantislight]

Hee! Your wish is my command:

Chapter 7: Cambiare is here
Chapter 8: Affettuoso is here

(And, yes, John's cracking as badly as the other two-- he just isn't showing it yet...)

[fififolle]

*tears well up* Okay, when John started to lose it, I was like, uh oh, everything is going to fall apart. Amazing. And it did. *hugs John too* Such a good chapter. So many heart-stopping moments. Damn. Like when Rodney slipped up on Collins' name.

[sgatlantislight]

Thanks. I have a feeling John falling apart would be really scary to see. I mean, the closest we've seen is probably The Eye and he was pretty scary there (hot, but scary).

[anonymous]

It was good to see John's demons this chapter. It's easy enough to overlook his responses because Carson's rape and Rodney's killing of the man are more immediate, visceral events and it's easy to sympathise with them. But knowing how protective John is and seeing how hard he's supressing it all so he can be strong for the other two, something was bound to give eventually.

I'm sad that Rodney couldn't be a little more understanding of that, when John's tried so hard to help him through his own nightmare. I was also sad and alarmed by John discovering Carson with the pills. At least Carson's depression has served to refocus John and Rodney off of their arguement. Hopefully long enough for them to cool off.

Laura.

[sgatlantislight]

Thanks. It's a lot of stress to put on a relationship, especially one that has to be secret.

[lillyjk]

I'm enjoying them breaking into pieces way too much. Each of them does angst in a different way, and such beautiful beautiful pain. *pets*

[sgatlantislight]

Yeah, they really do angst well.