Comments | sgatlantislight: Fic: Meltdown (PG)

sgatlantislight

Fic: Meltdown (PG)

Dec 12, 2005 16:52

Title: Meltdown
Author: SGAtlantisLight
Characters: McKay, Sheppard, Beckett, Zelenka, Teyla, Weir, Heightmeyer
Relationships: McKay/Sheppard, Zelenka/Beckett
Rating: PG for this part, but the series as a whole is NC-17
Warnings: A bit of angst
Spoilers: None
Summary: Part 36 of the Broken SeriesDisclaimer: The characters, the setting, etc. are NOT ( Read more... )

non-smut, broken, fiction, mckay/sheppard, slash, beckett/zelenka

Comments 30

anonymous December 12 2005, 22:21:51 UTC

OMG...Poor Rodney. John attacking him right on the heels of the memories has to be devasting to Rodney. I wonder...does John even realize the damage he's just done. Wow, that was so very intense. Hurry, hurry with more.

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sgatlantislight December 12 2005, 22:55:00 UTC

Hehe. I wondered who that was, as I don't get too many anony reviews without a signature.

As for the attack, um, well, you'll just have to wait.

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jo_zed_pee_em December 12 2005, 22:23:34 UTC

Nyeh!!!! What the...? I need more! you can't leave me hanging like that...also Bad John!! (although I can kinda see his point) but still grabbing Rodney like that...Bad bad John!!! and poor Rodney....please more quickly!!! ;o)

sgatlantislight December 12 2005, 22:58:00 UTC

Yes, bad bad John. I'll try to write more, but I have plotbunnies with other stories, including a, uh, Kavanaugh/Novak post-Critical Mass fic... (yes, I am sick).

jo_zed_pee_em December 12 2005, 23:03:22 UTC

Kavanagh/Novak...I will see you in the infirmary, I must be sick too!! I thought of that pairing while watching the episode...couldn't write it though....(also can you imagine the kids that they would produce....hehe)
;o)

sgatlantislight December 12 2005, 23:37:06 UTC

Well, it just occurred to me that he might be creepily hanging over her shoulder because, well, he's interested in her.

And kids? Well, they'd be brilliant, but neurotic.

dk_valentine December 12 2005, 22:35:20 UTC

Noooooo!! More? Soon? Please? You keep leaving us hanging like this...

sgatlantislight December 12 2005, 22:59:23 UTC

I'll try! Really. It was either leave it here or take several more days and have it be huge.

dk_valentine December 12 2005, 23:05:00 UTC

Yeah, I know how it goes. Just try to remember you've got all your readers hanging off a cliff (like you always do)...and you've done a damn good job of keeping us hooked with the suspense so far.

sgatlantislight December 12 2005, 23:38:12 UTC

Yeahyeah. Cliffies R Us.

But at least no one's, like, dying or anything, so it's not a huge cliffie.

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kerry_louise December 12 2005, 22:56:04 UTC

*squeeee @ update*

But gah what is John's trauma seriously, that was entirely uncalled for, I mean Rodney was just being Rodney... and okay clearly there is some underlying issue there that John doesn't feel terribly chatty about but scaring Rodney like that... not cool. Bad John!

I am curious though, I mean they can't keep him, they can't send him away it's a Catch 22. I can't wait to see where this is headed, even though clearly you're going to make me because you're evil.

Still I trust at least it will be worth waiting for, just as this part was.

Hugs,
K

sgatlantislight December 12 2005, 23:01:10 UTC

But gah what is John's trauma

That, right there, would be the crux of the matter...

And I certainly hope it'll be worth waiting for... ;>

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sgatlantislight December 13 2005, 02:27:44 UTC

Well, note Carson didn't come down too solidly on Rodney's side-- just made a couple of positive points about the idea. Considering the daggers Radek was throwing his way, I have a feeling Carson might've backed off... ;> Though, yeah, he's a just a tad grey as far as medical experimentation goes-- especially on someone he doesn't see as human. Question being, does he consider Deyn human?

As for John, well, there's more there than meets the eye.