This was such a cool plot!!! I love how it jumped around and had a confusing feel without being confusing to read. The differences in realities were very interesting as was the process John took in understanding what was going on (as well as Rodney's process trying to get John out of the chair).
I'm really glad you included the bit under the scanner - it gave Lannie a chance to speak for herself and that was really awesome in the context of the art kind of making her a character of her own. I was so excited as I read this and want to thank you for writing something so enjoyable.
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I'm really glad you included the bit under the scanner - it gave Lannie a chance to speak for herself and that was really awesome in the context of the art kind of making her a character of her own. I was so excited as I read this and want to thank you for writing something so enjoyable.
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Thank you so much for providing me with such a wonderful inspiration to play with. I'm glad you liked the end result. *hugs*
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And wheee! I haven't done much art-for-writing-fic-to so it was a really awesome experience :D *hugs you back*
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