Before a Fall by x_varda_x [H/C Flashfic #1]

[x_varda_x]

Challenge #: H/C Flashfic #1 (Prompt: pride, mercy and forgiveness)
Title: Before a Fall
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Comments

[goddess47]

Oh. Oh.... poor Rodney.... ouch.....

And needed to be forgiven by Teyla is something that would be important to Rodney. He's sometimes thoughtless but he doesn't mean to be mean on purpose....

Nicely done...

[x_varda_x]

Thanks! I love the friendship between Rodney and Teyla, and thought he would try to make amends if he believed he was going to die.

[rodneyisgodney]

Oh, my poor Rodney! You skewered him!

You never cease to amaze me with all the ways you whump Rodney.

Good job with this one!

[x_varda_x]

Thanks, RIG! I'm surprised too - that I can still think up different ways to whump Rodney after all this time! This was going to be my FF100 challenge writer's choice 'Arrogance' but I thought I'd use the idea for this instead and make it a bit longer ;)

[ed263]

Great story! Well written and entertaining!

Poor Rodney!! Skewered...ouch!! You know that had to have hurt!

Love how Rodney felt he had to apologized to Teyla...so Rodney. Also how the other team mates stayed with him, you just know they would not leave him no matter what! Go Team!

Thanks for aharing you story with us and I am looking forward to the next one!!

[agdrgn]

Excellent challenge reponse though Rodney seemed more than usually mean.

[tridget]

Oh, poor Rodney. Ouch! To have a really bad accident after a particularly grumpy day must have made him feel like he got what he deserved. Teyla was so sweetly forgiving as she tried to comfort Rodney.

[x_varda_x]

Thanks! I feel the whump is more painful when Rodney's in a bad mood anyway :D :o