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THE BITE OF DELUSION BY wildcat88 [LFWS #1 ROUND 4]

Dec 01, 2008 09:23

Title: The Bite of Delusion
Author: wildcat88
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: General S5
Prompt for the Round: Write a whump fic with John and ONE of his team. John POV.

( The Bite of Delusion )

lfws1: round4, lfws1: round4 entry, lfws, teyla whump, author:wildcat88, sheppard whump, lfws1, rated pg

Comments 16

rustydog December 7 2008, 06:08:59 UTC

I like that both of them are getting whumped - one by the other. Good verbs. I cared about the characters in this.

wildcat88 December 7 2008, 20:45:29 UTC

Thank you! I really appreciate the comment about the verbs. Four hundred words aren't many to work with so I have to be choosy. :D

tielan December 7 2008, 07:22:11 UTC

Oh, and now I want to see when Teyla wakes up and remembers what she's done! Beautifully written, brutal, and a lovely touch to have one of John's team-mates mistakenly attacking him!

wildcat88 December 7 2008, 21:02:07 UTC

Thank you so much for the lovely comments. I'm so glad you liked it.

sharterfan May 31 2012, 03:38:56 UTC

Oh this was good. Thanks for the Teyla whump too!

wildcat88 June 15 2012, 13:39:48 UTC

Thank you!