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DUTY FIRST BY barcardicider [LFWS #1 ROUND 3]

Nov 18, 2008 09:17

Title: Duty First
Author: barcardicider
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: None
Prompt for the Round: Choose from two to all characters from the list and write a story in which there is no dialogue at all. There must be social interaction, but you can’t write any ( Read more... )

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Comments 5

drufan November 18 2008, 14:17:23 UTC

Very exciting and well paced!

asugar November 18 2008, 15:31:14 UTC

I like how you capture his sense of honor and duy. Nicely done.

2bluaeryn November 19 2008, 19:17:34 UTC

Ah, this rings very true to the characters of both.

Well done.

jessnick05 November 20 2008, 20:03:14 UTC

I enjoyed this. Nice Lorne POV, ever the competent soldier. :) Good Zelenka too, I liked how he was scared, but still did what was needed. I thought it was very in character for him.

barcardicider November 23 2008, 12:44:25 UTC

Thank you for all lovely remarks, they are truly appreciated.

Mega thanks to my beta, who kept me on the right track. Thanks hun.