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sablecain in sgahcchallenges

A New Respect

Aug 22, 2007 16:12

“I missed.

That was the last thing Ronon thought before the huge quickening beast knocked him against the hard stone. As he swiveled in the air, the image of the unconscious scientist, bruised and bloodied, crossed his eyes. With Sheppard and Teyla still on their way, it would be only a matter of time before the creature took its prey. His vision ( Read more... )

challenge #3, ronon whump, comfort challenge, i missed, author:sablecain, mckay whump, rated pg-13, challenge #3 entry

Comments 13

x_erikah_x August 22 2007, 20:51:55 UTC

Really liked it. Loved to see Rodney saving Ronon for a change.

sablecain August 23 2007, 14:15:17 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

wildcat88 August 22 2007, 21:05:00 UTC

I really liked this. It was a great look at McKay through Ronon's eyes.

sablecain August 23 2007, 14:16:10 UTC

Thank you! I appreciate the comment!

re Flying Kitty flah07 August 22 2007, 23:58:54 UTC

Maybe its a nice flying kitty with sharp teeth, claws and wings? Maybe it's a good kitty that just does things that are misinterpreted as bad. ( I must read more) or and Rodney vomiting---deliciously gross.

Ohh, he shot the kitty, or missed, or shot ronon, or missed. Poor Rodney, triple vision isn't like a triple scoop of your favorite icecream. Nope. (hold on must read more)

Ohh, the IV pole. Gotcha.

Yeah, Rodney will be an ass at PT not Carson. So there. Oh and Carson is ALIVE!!!! Yeah!

Rodney gets no respect. Poor guy. He saved them! He saved their bacon!

I guess the big flying kitty wasn't so nice after all. So sad to be flying kitty, or not so flying kitty.

Wonderful challenge answer. I like the capital C in this h/c story. Beautifully done.

Re: re Flying Kitty sablecain August 23 2007, 14:18:34 UTC

LOL I love your comments! Of course Carson is alive. I plan on keeping him that way for as long as possible. (who knows what next season will bring as far as writing but for now...)

Yeah, big kitty not so nice. (though I think it would look cool!)

Glad you liked the story!!

Lovely nottasha August 23 2007, 02:07:53 UTC

You write such lovely Ronon... and I love that you had Rodney save them! Very cool

And Sheppard's pretty good too :-)

Re: Lovely sablecain August 23 2007, 14:19:05 UTC

hee. thank you.

sholio August 23 2007, 04:45:27 UTC

Son of Creature Feature! Hee! I love the role reversal, with Rodney saving Ronon instead of the other way around. And Ronon putting his hand on Rodney's at the end -- awww!

sablecain August 23 2007, 14:20:54 UTC

Thank you! I was struggling with a title so it almost ended up officially named 'son of creature feature' Has a nice ring, don't you think? NT came up with it.

Glad you liked the story. I'm all for Rodney doing the saving, especially when its not in a way we expect him to (tech stuff).