THE BET BY writerjc [LFWS #1 ROUND 2]

Nov 05, 2008 09:10

Title: The Bet
Author: writerjc
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: None
Prompt for the Round: It MUST be told using an original character point of view (the marine guarding the gateroom, the guy who has to clean the blood from the floor of the jumper, the med ( Read more... )

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linzi5 November 5 2008, 13:45:07 UTC
I really liked this. I liked that the bet wouldn't be cashed in for personal gain, but to buy gifts for the injured. Nice touch, I thought, speaking much about the loyaly of the members of the expedition. :)

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writerjc November 11 2008, 02:38:50 UTC
Thank you. I always imagine that in such a situation as the Pegasus galaxy there would be a lot of gallows humor, but only because they care. Glad you liked it :)

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wildcat88 November 5 2008, 14:13:15 UTC
GREAT ending. Love that idea.

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writerjc November 11 2008, 02:39:09 UTC
Thank you :)

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2bluaeryn November 6 2008, 02:22:09 UTC
A different perspective on the *betting* pools. Nicely done.

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writerjc November 11 2008, 02:39:35 UTC
Thank you very much :)

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anonymous November 9 2008, 04:40:11 UTC
Aw, it's both funny and sad that they would have an office pool on injuries, but of course they would! Unique setup for the story, I like it. Well-written, too.

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writerjc November 11 2008, 02:41:26 UTC
thank you! :)

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dimity_blue November 10 2008, 16:10:02 UTC
This was fantastic. I loved the confusion, the 'what the hell's going on?!', and Teyla and John in the middle of it, badly injured.

It was sweet too, that the winnings kept on getting donated to the 'get well gift' for the injured parties. A really nice story.

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writerjc November 11 2008, 02:44:03 UTC
Thank you - I'm glad you liked it. :)

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