Creature Feature

Aug 15, 2007 21:28

Creature Feature

“I just need a minute.” McKay hunched over, breathing heavily in the steady, drizzling rain. “You’ve got to give me a minute,” he said again, wiping a wet hand across his brow.

Reluctantly, Ronon stopped. “We don’t have time, McKay.” He studied the overgrown path before them. “We need to keep moving”

“You don’t have ( Read more... )

team fic, team challenge, challenge #2, author:sablecain, challenge #2 entry, mckay whump, worse than dagoba, rated pg

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Yay! nottasha August 16 2007, 02:01:34 UTC
How much do I love Rodney and Ronon friendship stories? So MUCH! I love it when Ronon dishes out the comfort. You do such a good job with him. I love your portrayal.

Poor Rodney. That's gotta smart! Ouch!

Great story

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Re: Yay! sablecain August 16 2007, 02:16:17 UTC
Hee. I really do have a Ronon weakness.

Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it!

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wildcat88 August 16 2007, 03:56:57 UTC
Great story. Love Ronon's guilt at having to shoot McKay.

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sablecain August 16 2007, 12:20:13 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it.

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x_erikah_x August 16 2007, 13:29:30 UTC
Loved the Rodney and Ronon friendship!!! Thanks for joining!

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sablecain August 16 2007, 14:26:05 UTC
Thanks for creating the community. I'm hoping it'll help keep me writing regularly...will have to see. Glad you liked the story!

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re Snakes in the Trees!!!! anonymous August 16 2007, 22:56:24 UTC
McKay is getting crushed by a Boa Constrictor !!!!! (isn't that a song? not the McKay part but the rest?) Ronon must unconstrict him! Save him Ronon! (must read more---hold on ( ... )

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Re: re Snakes in the Trees!!!! sablecain August 16 2007, 23:02:22 UTC
LOL Your feedback is a work of art!! I love it! Thanks for the comments. Glad you enjoyed it. And yes Beckett lives--Denial is a beautiful place.

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tipper_green August 17 2007, 01:34:48 UTC
Oooh! How much do I love Ronon and Rodney stories! And I loved the premise -- BIG SNAKE! Hee! I loved it! Nicely done, D!

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sablecain August 17 2007, 02:15:39 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it:) The world needs more Ronon and Rodney friendship stories!! Heck, the world just needs more RONON! hee.

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