LEAPIN' LIZARDS BY titan5 [LFWS #1 ROUND 1]

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Title: Leapin' Lizards
Author: titan5
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: None
Prompt for the Round: > Write a story featuring the team in which ONLY dialogue is used. No scene setters at all. Just pure dialogue. Not even ‘... Sheppard said’ or ‘... Rodney

Comments

[sterenyk_strey]

Cute! Shep whump with a dose of Ronon stunning, and - humour! Love Teyla's final comment. Exasperated with the boys. What we women have to put up with. Or would like to have to put up with! Nice not to have to constantly reread to find out who's speaking.

[titan5]

Thank you!! I had my daughter read it to see if she could tell who was speaking at least most of the time. This one was definitely hard!! And Ronon seems to enjoy stunning John just a little too much!!

[linziday]

LOL...What is it with stuff in this galaxy biting you and then hanging on?"

[titan5]

You have to admit - he has a point!! Thanks for the feedback!!

[2bluaeryn]

The icon says it all.

[titan5]

And I love the icon. I wish I knew how to do cool stuff like that. I do good to post stories without messing them up (LOL)! Many thanks!!

[kristen999]

Oh this was lovely! Funny and easy to follow the voices.

[titan5]

Thanks (drooling over icon)!! I was worried about whether I was just following them because I wrote the thing. My daughter checked it for me, but I was afraid she was "being nice to mom".

[dimity_blue]

Heh, John's going to be annoyed when he realises Ronon stunned him. But at least it got the lizard off!

Nice story. :o)

[titan5]

Yeah, I figure his waking words would be, "Ronon shot me . . . again!" But as Ronon pointed out - it worked. Many thanks!!