BUGGED BY leesa_perrie [LFWS #1 ROUND 1]

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Title: Bugged
Author: leesa_perrie
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: Probably Season 3, nothing specific.
Author's Note: Beta read by jayne_perry
Prompt for the Round: > Write a story featuring the team in which ONLY dialogue is used. No scene setters at all. Just pure

Comments

[2bluaeryn]

Liked the title. Loved the premise. Poor Shep and *bugs* just don't go well together.

Nicely done.

[leesa_perrie]

Thanks! I couldn't resist the bug idea...poor Sheppard! *evil whumper's grin*

[dimity_blue]

What is it with John and gruesome insects? At this rate, he'll be paranoid next time he sees one.

Nice story though. I liked John complaining and pouting at the end about not having a radio. :oD

[leesa_perrie]

John is obviously very attractive to insects!! *g*

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks.

[sherryw]

Loved the banter between the team members. Did a great job with the characterizations, even with McKay talking to Zelenka about not touching anything. Great job!

[leesa_perrie]

Thanks! I was worried about that bit with Zelenka, glad you liked it!

[angw]

Poor Sheppard and his attraction to bugs...

[leesa_perrie]

I know, I know...bugs just love him!! *g*

Thanks.