Back to Business as Usual by Ceitie [Fall 2008 Fic Exchange]

Oct 08, 2008 12:44

Challenge: Fall 2008 Fic Exchange
Title: Back to Business as Usual
Author: ceitie
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2180
Characters: Teyla, John
Genre: H/C, humour
Disclaimer: Yeah, I don't own 'em, more's the pity.
Spoilers: For season five up to The Daedalus Variations
Writing for: jadesfire2808Assignment: Anything with John or Rodney doing the comforting, rather than the ( Read more... )

author:ceitie, fall 2008 fic exchange, rated pg, teyla whump

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jadesfire October 8 2008, 17:11:25 UTC
Oh wow. This was totally worth the wait! I've recently gained a real thing for Teyla fics, and I love the way you've written her. Calm and collected and with just the right amount of fight and humour with the fear. This was so vivid, I was wincing for her, and I loved the way she fell asleep to the sound of John's voice. *sigh*

Lovely, thank you so much.

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ceitie October 10 2008, 03:39:33 UTC
Yay, thanks, glad you liked it! I think John's voice would be pretty nice to fall asleep to, don't you? *g* Sorry again for how late it was!

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space1traveler October 8 2008, 18:21:45 UTC
That was good. Its good to see John giving the comfort. Read you later and thanks....k

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ceitie October 10 2008, 03:40:29 UTC
Thanks! John should take his turn giving out the comfort too, I say. *g*

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sholio October 8 2008, 18:29:13 UTC
Oh, how sweet and lovely! There is not nearly enough Teyla h/c out there, and this was wonderful. Her calm response to the situation is perfect for her (though helped along by hypothermia, I'm sure *g*), and I love John's worry, and Teyla's glimpse of Ronon's face, and the whole idea of Rodney taking care of Torren. Very nice!

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ceitie October 10 2008, 03:42:23 UTC
Thanks very much! Yeah, the hypothermia helped a little. Even Teyla's not that blase. *g* Rodney would probably be pretty good with babies, I think, once you actually talked him into it in the first place.

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wildcat88 October 8 2008, 18:42:06 UTC
You have a wonderful Teyla voice, and it was nice to see the roles reversed here.

“As Rodney is not here to say it, I must ask: do you mean ‘ordinary person’ fine, or simply ‘John Sheppard’ fine?”

*snorfle* LOVE that.

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ceitie October 10 2008, 03:42:53 UTC
Thanks! Teyla should get more comfort, totally.

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perspi October 8 2008, 18:51:07 UTC
OH OH OH I LOVE THIS! *snorfles youuuu*

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ceitie October 10 2008, 03:43:39 UTC
Yay! Thank you! *tackle-hugs*

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