In Memoriam by Jadesfire [2008 fic exchange]

[jadesfire]

Challenge: Fall 2008 Fic Exchange
Title: In Memoriam
Author: jadesfire2808
Rating: PG
Word count: ~2,300
Characters: Ronon (H/C), Rodney, Team
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Disclaimer: MGM owns the show and not me or there would be much more hitting with big sticks.
Spoilers: Tag to Broken Ties so everything up to that point
Writing for: leesa_perrie

Assignment: Ronon is hurt/

Comments

[gnine]

Can I just say...AWWWWWWWWWW! I love how comforted Ronon is and Rodney all protective of him with Woolsey and then being kinda embarrassed about it afterward. Too CUTE! Oh Team!Love/Rodney & Ronon friendship for the WIN! ^____^

[jadesfire]

*giggle* Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed.

Also? Icon love!

[leesa_perrie]

Oooh, I LOVE it!! A great tag to Broken Ties. I love the way Rodney stands up to Woolsey, and the way his voice helps to ground Ronon.

Ronon's POV was spot on - he's lost so much in his life, but has also found a new family on Atlantis. The hints of humour in amongst the angst were great (Rodney always has the chocolate pudding, Ronon takes it! Heidi and Lederhosen, 'cos yes, sooo like Rodney to say something like that! etc).

It fitted in with canon (Rodney talking about piano lessons when Ronon wakes up) and the characters are perfect. LOVE IT!!! Totally!! Thank you!

[jadesfire]

Oh yay! I'm so glad you like it :D I wasn't sure if an episode tag was a 'suitable' h/c entry, so I'm delighted that it works!

Thank you! :D

[mad_jaks]

He breaks off, sensing Ronon's stare. "What?"
"Nothing." Ronon stretches a little, just to feel it burn. "Pass me the chocolate pudding?"
There's a moment, the slightest pause when Rodney narrows his eyes and looks as though he's going to argue.
Ronon glares.
Rodney looks sheepish and peeved at the same time, but passes the pudding over,

You know I love it already, but I had to quote you this scene as I can actually *see* it :D

[jadesfire]

Hee! thank you so much, for everything :)

[wildcat88]

This was precious! I love Rodney's protectiveness and his soft heart (gives up the chocolate!) underneath the bluster. Really terrific Ronon and Rodney voices too.

Have you met Heidi? Not blonde, surprisingly, and whatever you do, don't mention pigtails to her. After the whole thing with the Lederhosen, she's kind of sensitive about it.

Made me laugh out loud. And I'm at work!

[jadesfire]

Rodney tries so hard to be a good friend, even if he has to sacrifice chocolate to do it ;)

*grin* Sorry about that - hope your colleagues didn't mind the giggling...

Thank you so much!

[xparrot]

So very sweet - I love Ronon & Rodney's prickly must-be-friendship-because-it-can't-be-anything-else, and you show it off beautifully here, that Rodney doesn't understand except he does, that Ronon needs Rodney's constancy. And heh, Rodney gave up chocolate pudding! It must be serious!

[jadesfire]

*beams* Thank you! Rodney tries so hard, and chocolate pudding is definitely the ultimate sacrifce :)