Fic: The Body Remembers (Lorne/Chuck Campbell, PG13)

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Title: The Body Remembers
Author: squeakyoflight
Recipient: Sexycazzy
Pairing: Evan Lorne/Chuck Campbell
Rating: PG-13 for some minor swearing
Disclaimer: None
Word count: approx. 9,500
Author's Notes: Sexycazzy wanted Atlantis to be in a superpower universe, where everyone on the base has some kind of a superpower. Perhaps Lorne could be the only one who doesn't have a

Comments

[camshaft22]

This is so very good.

[squeakyoflight]

I am very glad you liked it. :)

Squeaky

[mific]

This was remarkably touching, and a compelling story. I liked the language of flowers aspect, and Ronon being sneaky and awesome. But hey, it'd be even better if you got the mods to change Sadatan to Satedan. It'd make Ronon happy, anyway.

[squeakyoflight]

Hey Mific!

Thanks for the kind words, and the after-the-fact beta. I'll see what I can do.

And Ronon is always awsome. Totally. :)

[squidgiepdx]

All nice and angsty... Hurt Chuck and Evan, and then the whole, "You're my husband" - very well done!

[squeakyoflight]

Thanks Squidgiepdx!

That is one of my favourite lines, for the soap-opera vibe alone. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

Squeaky

[runpunkrun]

Ronon! I thought he was saying that stuff about Chuck just to piss off Evan, but I wasn't entirely sure until the end. Ronon probably thought that was hilarious. *g*

Nice fic, I especially like the descriptions of the tattoos Chuck made.

[squeakyoflight]

I really appreciate your comment Runpunkrun! I really enjoyed writing the scene between Evan and Ronon. I'm very glad it worked for you.

And I just love tattoos. :)

Happy New Year!

Squeaky

[that_which]

Oh, yenta Ronon, how I love you :)

I've never read Lorne/Chuck before, but they're sweet together. Nice job.

[squeakyoflight]

Ronon is impossibly cool, and very fun to write.

Thanks so much for taking a chance on my fic, That_Which! and it's very kind of you to tell me that you liked it.

Squeaky