Fic: Shrapnel in his Skin (McKay/Dex, McKay/Sheppard, NC-17)

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Title: Shrapnel in his Skin
Author: moonlettuce
Recipient: dare_darcy
Pairing: McKay/Dex, McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Summary: He can't go to Teyla with this. And there's a hundred reasons why it can't be Lorne.

Comments

[skieswideopen]

Oh, painful and lovely. Beautiful, beautiful writing.

[moonlettuce]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed :D

[moonlettuce]

Thanks; glad you enjoyed :D

[skinscript]

I always like Rodney losing it a little, cause on the show, even when he does lose it - his temper, his composure, his sense of humour - he never really loses himself.

I like all the subtext here - all the things the story hints at but doesn't say.

[moonlettuce]

Thanks :D I was nervous about the amount of unsaid undertones in the story, so I'm really pleased that they worked :D

[moonlettuce]

The original start of it had John dead, but as I was writing it that just didn't work (and I felt really guilty ::grin::), so I changed it to John being alive. I guess, although I'm an angst-puppy, I still need the happy/hopeful ending ;)

Glad you enjoyed that story :D

(Also: Thomas ftw! I'm so glad that Jim Butcher's done a Thomas pov book - although not best impressed by the price of it...)

[krysalys]

Damn. Perfect.
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[moonlettuce]

Thanks :D