Fic: Keep on Moving (Dex/Zelenka)

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Title: Keep on Moving
Author: zinfic
Rating: R
Pairing: Ronon/Radek
Word count: 6900
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Spoilers: Runner and Sateda

Acknowledgements: Huge thanks to the_cephalopod for beta reading and assuring me that this didn’t suck. Equally huge thanks to tagetes and lavvyan for helping out with the Czech. You’re the best!

Notes/summary: Written for busaikko,

Comments

[sometimes_annie]

This is wonderful! I love how Radek and Ronon work together as a team, each smart and strong and respecting the other's abilities, and how the dark humor they share shines through. The ending was just perfect, full of sorrow and hope. Not a pairing I ever thought of, but you made it work amazingly well. Thanks so much :)

[ticklie]

What he lacks in physical strength he makes up for by being a sneaky little bastard.

You owned my heart with that one line, and then you very gently, very determinedly broke it into a million little hurting pieces with the rest of the fic. The depth of emotion in this is staggering and I am in awe of the way you wrote this (to me) unlikely pairing as if it were the most natural thing in the world. Also, I don't know what's better, competent!Ronon or sneaky!Radek. In short, I love this story to pieces.

Thank you for this, busaikko's Santa.

[lunasky]

Wow. This was very well written and wonderfully dark and powerful. I think you captured them both perfectly, Zelenka always struck me as a sneaky bastard *g* And the ending was a wonderful punch. Dark, but hopeful. Wonderfully done.

[goddess47]

::sniffle:: For his inner eye, he sees Atlantis going up in smoke, disintegrating and disappearing into nothing. That’s two homes lost now, and it doesn’t seem fair.

It's not fair.... but somehow it's Pegasus... and glad that they aren't alone out there...... Very Nice!

[kelliem]

This is a great story, thank you! I've got a soft spot for this pairing, and you really did a wonderful job with it.