I had so many ideas when I was writing this, and it was hard to leave it so vague, but I wanted to give the other writers a bit of wiggle room. I'm curious which ideas the other writers will pick up on...
If I was next in line, and I think we can all thank our lucky stars that I am not, then I would have the team hearded by telepathic sabre-toothed squirrles. But then I am a bit strange.
Strange is not a bad thing. I haven't seen all of SG-1 yet. I am getting the dvds from netflix one by one so I don't know. If they haven't done that then they should. Because it would be awesome.
fr. writer#3, who dug your story part just like it was a rare dino bone! :c )johnsheppardluvJanuary 24 2006, 03:12:22 UTC
hey! ;):);)
yay! you posted...at last! :);):)
great job dude! :) luv the description & the voices...i can hear the actors in my head even, which is so cool, cuz it's sounding very natural, not forced at all, unlike a lot of dialogue i read in the fandom world.
Re: fr. writer#3, who dug your story part just like it was a rare dino bone! :c )johnsheppardluvJanuary 24 2006, 10:12:06 UTC
Heh. Yeah. I only found out I was up first when I checked the comm on Sunday, because RL attacked me midweek and I didn't have time to check my LJ flist, so it was written in a bit of a mad panic...
I'm glad it turned out OK, and that you liked it. I was a bit worried I hadn't put enough description in there; I think that's one of the things I'd change if I could. Those damn corridors...
Yay! You liked the voices! :D
I tried to put a little something for everyone in there, not knowing what would work for the rest of you as writers. ;)
I can't wait to see what happens next... And I'm glad the pressure's off me, so I can sit back and enjoy it! LOL
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I had so many ideas when I was writing this, and it was hard to leave it so vague, but I wanted to give the other writers a bit of wiggle room. I'm curious which ideas the other writers will pick up on...
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But, didn't they already do that on Sg1 with the Nox? They were some seriously squirrelly aliens. *G*
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yay! you posted...at last! :);):)
great job dude! :) luv the description & the voices...i can hear the actors in my head even, which is so cool, cuz it's sounding very natural, not forced at all, unlike a lot of dialogue i read in the fandom world.
so yes. yes. a most excellent start, zellieh!
& i cant wait till it's my turn!:)
lol
-Sharma :)
aka listed as writer #3
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I'm glad it turned out OK, and that you liked it. I was a bit worried I hadn't put enough description in there; I think that's one of the things I'd change if I could. Those damn corridors...
Yay! You liked the voices! :D
I tried to put a little something for everyone in there, not knowing what would work for the rest of you as writers. ;)
I can't wait to see what happens next... And I'm glad the pressure's off me, so I can sit back and enjoy it! LOL
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