This one just "bugged" me.

[crazymadi]

The author of this fan fic admitted that she didn't have a beta.  She really, really needs one, so I called in the guys.

SUMMARY: Sheppard and McKay are captured by an ant creature with mind probing and telepathic abilities. Lots of Sheppard and McKay whump. Teyla and Ronon run into trouble of their own. Atlantis tries to send a rescue team.

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[history_gurl]

Fine, edit the damn thing and kill my comment dead. I hope you're happy. Cuz, well, ya know, I am.

This thing rocks hard. Like a rocking thing. And I got popcorn today, so there.

Yay you for posting. Yay me for reading. It's all good.

[crazymadi]

Why, thank you, my sister. I am very sorry to have editted you out. I was almost as sorry to have editted me out. Thank God we both editted back in.

All is now right with the world.

[blade_girl]

I'm just sorry you had to read that story. I'm sorry you made us read it. I'm sorry it was written. I'm... just one sorry chick.

[crazymadi]

You know what I'm sorry about? I'm sorry that I don't know how to spell edited. Oh, look. Now I do. Life is good. Never mind.

[empressvesica]

Teyla: Ah. I see. What are rats?

So very Teyla. Lovely send up of a not so lovely fic!!