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RESULTS FOR LFWS #3 ROUND 5

Nov 17, 2009 04:57

All votes are counted and voting for the Last Fic Writer Standing 3 Round 5 is closed. All authors are now revealed and the feedback to the individual posts are unscreened. These fics are now released to be posted elsewhere by the respective authors.

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lfws3: round 5, results

Comments 9

Comments brynnh87 November 17 2009, 15:25:44 UTC

Could I have my comments for this round? (though I imagine at least some mention the fact that I messed up and put Ronon in there)

I've very much enjoyed being in this contest. Thank you all for having me around this long. This was the first time I'd EVER written for Atlantis and I found I quite enjoyed it.

Thanks again, and I do thoroughly plan on being in the next Session of this.

Good luck to all the authors continuing. I will still be reading and voting. You all are very talented.

Brynn

Re: Comments annieb1955 November 18 2009, 11:51:16 UTC

All the best, Brynn. Look forward to seeing you in the next round.

annieb1955 November 17 2009, 19:36:00 UTC

Wow, what a lovely surprise to wake up to on another hot Aussie morning. Unscreened crit is fine, thank you.

x_erikah_x November 17 2009, 19:50:38 UTC

"the story was complete and engaging, everyone was in character, and the technical writing aspects were solid. Well done ( ... )

ga_unicorn November 18 2009, 01:47:29 UTC

Squeaking by again! Comment, please; unscreened is fine. Thanks!

x_erikah_x November 18 2009, 10:06:03 UTC

"Lovely description of John’s emotions, and a well thought out conversation with Elizabeth. The characters felt spot on for early Season 1. I’m not sure how we go from this to the party scene we see in canon, but that’s not a big problem and is probably due to my occasional lack of imagination."

"Well written angst showing John's real feelings of what happened to Sumner."

"I really didn't buy Sheppard as the kind of man who would lie about Sumner. It felt very OOC and threw me totally out of the story. It also overlooked the fact that Ford would have been in a position to know that Sheppard shot Sumner."

" very realistic missing scene, solid writing."

"It bothered me a little to see Sheppard lying about what happened with Sumner and I had to pick one so I had to go with the unease I felt due to that aspect."

ltcoljsheppard November 18 2009, 06:42:26 UTC

Congratulations, Annie!! Well deserved! Loved the story!

annieb1955 November 18 2009, 07:49:34 UTC

Thanks so much, John. I liked yours too. Good luck next round.

ltcoljsheppard November 18 2009, 08:12:48 UTC

You too, darlin'. And to all!