THE CONSEQUENCES OF ACTION BY ga_unicorn [LFWS#3 ROUND 5]

Nov 09, 2009 15:03

Title: The Consequences of Action
Author: ga_unicorn
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: a missing scene for Rising
Prompt for the Round: The fic must be set in season one and have only season one characters. H/C not obligatory.

The Consequences of Action )

lfws3: round 5, character: aiden ford, character: other, genre: angst, character: elizabeth weir, rating: pg, genre: episode tag, character: john sheppard, author: ga_unicorn

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tridget November 11 2009, 00:59:57 UTC
I like the way Sheppard was portrayed here. There's a sense that he's still a liitle numb from the events but pressing onward because he knows what has to be done. You've done a nice job of presenting the rationale for his actions, particularly the understanding that his choices had to be driven by what would best support the expedition as a whole. I think this does justice to the intelligence of Sheppard's character.

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Consequences Of Action ceramicat November 13 2009, 20:11:22 UTC
Nice to see the missing parts of the first encounter with Shep assuming command. Just what I would have expected from a Military Commander. Nice.

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wiley_nilly November 14 2009, 02:16:25 UTC
Nice insight. Sentence structure didn't flow so well, IMO - the first three paragraphs could have been one.

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