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A MINUTE AGO YOU WERE GOING SURFING! BY ltcoljsheppard[LFWS#3 ROUND 5]

Nov 09, 2009 15:02

Title: A Minute Ago You Were Going Surfing!
Author: ltcoljsheppard
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: A tag to the episode "Suspicion".
Prompt for the Round: The fic must be set in season one and have only season one characters. H/C not obligatory.

( A Minute Ago You Were Going Surfing! )

lfws3: round 5, character: aiden ford, character: other, character: teyla emmagan, genre: team, rating: pg, author: ltcoljsheppard, character: rodney mckay, genre: episode tag, character: john sheppard

Comments 1

wiley_nilly November 14 2009, 02:12:25 UTC

Cute story, but the sentence structure was choppy. It didn't flow very well.