Comments | sga_lfws: TAG TO 'TABULA RASA' BY <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/beckys91">beckys91</a></strong> [LFWS #3 ROUND 1]

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TAG TO 'TABULA RASA' BY beckys91 [LFWS #3 ROUND 1]

Sep 10, 2009 17:38

Title: Tag to 'Tabula Rasa'
Author: beckys91
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: 'Tabula Rasa'
Prompt for the Round: Write an episode tag or missing scene using script format. The team is a must, but you can include other characters, OC or not. H/C is not a must ( Read more... )

character: teyla emmagan, character: ronon dex, gene: team, character: jennifer keller, lfws3: round 1, genre: hurt/comfort, rating: pg, author: beckys91, character: rodney mckay, genre: episode tag, character: john sheppard

Comments 4

chrissie0707 September 14 2009, 01:36:24 UTC

I think McKay and Keller are very nicely in character, but Sheppard seems to be just a bit weaker than we've ever seen him in the show.

beckys91 September 18 2009, 16:47:03 UTC

Thank you, Chrissie. I think you're right with your comment on Sheppard ... I was pretty uncomfortable with the combination of the script format and the length (and it being the first time I've ever written any of these characters). Maybe if I turn this into a slightly longer narrative story I could smooth that out. I appreciate your honesty. Becky

lindagagne September 17 2009, 09:11:26 UTC

Really liked the h/c here and it completed the way they left the 'where's rodney' question.

beckys91 September 18 2009, 16:48:18 UTC

Yeah, that hanging "where's Rodney" always bugged me! LOL. Thanks so much for leaving a comment! Becky