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Awake

Mar 18, 2008 18:27

Title: Awake
Characters: John, Teyla, team
Spoilers: The Last Man and season five "speculations - by speculations I mean that the ideas used for this story are not based on any particular spoiler, just my personal what-ifs.
Recepiant: Prompt provided by
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character: ronon dex, character: john sheppard, .fanfic, character: teyla emmagan, character: team, character: rodney mckay

Comments 9

kristen999 March 19 2008, 00:07:28 UTC

Wow this was really moving. I could feel his sorrow and desperation of loosing everyone and everything. You captured his state of mind perfectly lost in a void of fevered-nightmares and at the end of the tunnel was Teyla alive with her baby--the key to a bright future instead of the dark one foretold.

The hug and relief was very real and I could feel him cling to her like that.

Beautiful.

kriadydragon March 19 2008, 04:57:46 UTC

Yay! You liked it :D

leesa_perrie March 19 2008, 20:57:43 UTC

Wow, very emotional and yet in keeping with canon. Nice.

kriadydragon March 20 2008, 00:26:23 UTC

Thank you :D

wildcat88 March 21 2008, 05:35:59 UTC

*sniff* Nice response to the prompt. His fear of losing them combined with his exhausted brain might very well allow him to return a hug. Poor woobie.

kriadydragon March 23 2008, 03:58:51 UTC

Thanks! :D

black_raven135 May 2 2008, 05:56:22 UTC

Delirium demands a high price sometimes....
It is a wonder they did not lose him........

~~Great story~~

kriadydragon May 3 2008, 05:15:46 UTC

:) Thanks.

kiku65 June 30 2008, 22:28:03 UTC

*flails* Don't scare me like that! As soon as I read the words "Teyla's dead"... gah!