Humor, Week 1: The Law is an Ass

[sholio]

Title: The Law is an Ass
Author: derry667
Prompt: Illegal
Word Count: 2500-ish
Rating: PG
Spoilers: None, really. But I'm sort of assuming it's set in season 3.
Characters: Elizabeth, John, Rodney, Teyla, Ronon, Carson and Lorne
Summary: Sheppard's team encounter the donkey-worshipping inhabitants of M4S-291.

Additional Notes and Warnings: The

Comments

[sgafan33]

That was amazing! I cracked up at the crack! Thanks for sharing!

[derry667]

Thanks. Glad you like. 'Twas crack indeed.

[madripoor_rose]

Bwa-hah-ha! Hysterical! I bet you had a lot of fun coming up with all those lines. Great story!

[derry667]

Thank you. I must admit it was fun - and I also had quite a bit of help coming up with the lines.

[naye]

*snerk*

I really don't think my glee at this whole thing can be textually rendered, but I laughed and laughed and laughed, and - poor, poor Elizabeth. She and Teyla deserve to have a quiet drink together after this. I mean - even Carson! Even Lorne! It cracks me up just thinking about it. XD

[derry667]

*preens*

Shucks! Thank you! So glad you enjoyed that much.

And yes, Elizabeth and Teyla definitely deserve a drink (if not canonisation) for dealing with these guys.

[ladyflowdi]

I laughed from beginning to end, but the part that really got me was

"It's not every day that your CO calls you and asks for a jumper so he can go cruising for some ass," Lorne said with a straight face. Damn him.

HEEE. Awesome! Thanks for sharing this!

[derry667]

Thanks. So glad you enjoyed it. I must admit that I put Lorne in the fic for the sole purpose of having him say that line (it was one of the first jokes that came to me).

Review

[agdrgn]

Hahahaha! This is hystericaly funny. A lot of humor really isn't at all. But this? This is fantastic.

--Silverthreads

Re: Review

[derry667]

Thanks ever so much. And for your comments over at fanfiction.net too!

I'm so glad you enjoyed this fic and my warped sense of humour. Cheers!