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Action/Adventure, Week 2: Always Hope (3/3)

Jun 06, 2010 14:40

Title: Always Hope
Author: stella_pegasi
Genre: Action/Adventure
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan, Ronon Dex, Evan Lorne, OC
Spoilers: None
Warnings: violence, minor language, brief sexual situation, suggestion of non-con
Het/Slash/Gen: Gen
Word count: 28,165

( Always Hope (Part Three - Ch. 7-8) )

genre:action

Comments 5

titan5 June 7 2010, 02:40:38 UTC

I loved this. Lots of action and danger and tension. Lots of team troubles and caring. Your OCs are very real and I liked the ones that weren't sociopaths (LOL). I was so worried about Banar. And I can see John wanting to learn a new card game. I loved the way the story kept moving forward, every new scene upping the stakes just a little bit more. Even though I wanted the Regent and his crew to get punished, I kind of liked the open ending where they got away - cause that would probably happen as well. Leaves the possibility of future woes caused by the crazy people with the youth serum!!

stella_pegasi June 22 2010, 22:09:02 UTC

Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comments, and thank you for taking the time let me know that you enjoyed the story. I would imagine these crazy people might just show up again.

I apologize for being a bit tardy in replying...RL has been fun the last few days.

Thanks again.

coolbreeze1 June 7 2010, 03:35:28 UTC

Enjoyed this! I really liked the friendship John strikes up with Desman and the others. Love that there was tons of action for all of them. Just when I thought John managed to rescue them all, he goes and gets kidnaps. Very cool world building too. Great job!

stella_pegasi June 22 2010, 22:15:18 UTC

Thank you very much. I never intended for John to develop a friendship with Desman, as the character developed it seemed natural for that to happen. I sort of like him as well.

Thank you so much for your kind comments, I truly appreciate them. I also thank you very much for taking the time to let me know.

As I said, earlier, my apologies; I intended to reply to you as soon as the reveal occurred, but RL got a bit busy.

Thanks again!

sholio June 26 2010, 06:18:04 UTC

Very exciting! The OCs were well developed, too. :)