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Team, Week 1: Walls Instead of Bridges

May 05, 2009 23:56

Title: Walls Instead of Bridges
Author: live-brave
Genre: Team
Prompt Drift
Word Count: 2800
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: Teyla can feel the rest of the team drifting away from her.
Notes: The title is based on the quote, "People are lonely because they build walls instead of bridges."

( Walls Instead of Bridges )

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Comments 10

explodedpen May 6 2009, 09:30:28 UTC

Teyla's awesome :D Oh boys, believing they knew what was best for her...without actually letting her know, lol.

This was a great story!

gaffsie May 6 2009, 14:53:09 UTC

Err, at least they meant well, even if they did have a funny way of showing their devotion? ;)

I'm glad Teyla managed to make herself clear in the end though. :)

michelel72 May 7 2009, 05:04:39 UTC

Oh, poor Teyla, and poor clumsy boys! It's good she knows how to forgive -- they definitely need her!

Walls Instead of Bridges nottasha May 8 2009, 00:53:35 UTC

The shows did seem kinda 'off' while Teyla was on "maternity leave". I really missed the teaminess! It's great that you addressed that void and put them back together. Nice!

jessnick05 May 20 2009, 15:56:58 UTC

I enjoyed this. I could definitely see John, Rodney, and Ronon doing this; probably trying to be sensitive but going about it all wrong. Loved Woolsey being more perceptive than anyone else. Loved Teyla setting them all straight, and her line being part of the team - I am doing it for Torrin, not in spite of him was great. And that whole scene with the boys talking about Dr. Phil was hilarious! :)