Timing is Everything by Barkeep - City Exploration Challenge

[barkeep]

Title: Timing is Everything
Author: Barkeep
Rating: R
Warnings: Slashy intent (McShep)
Disclaimer: They're only mine in beer-induced hallucinations...
Notes: Sort of a sequel to last week's voyeurism challenge, Hands , but I think it could stand on it's own. Big smooches to mgbutterfly for giving it a quick once over and keeping me from making any horrible

Comments

[kalikahuntress]

Oh wow, i was laughing so hard when reading this bcse I couldn't believe John actually commented on Rodney's nipples, esp. in this situation. This was funny and hot, and I loved the ending, oh Ford, so sweet and clueless:)

[barkeep]

Poor John, he can't believe he commented on Rodney's nipples either. I'm sure he's in a corner somewhere banging his head against the wall... :)
Thanks for the comments!

[sethoz]

Oh Ford, Ford, innocent, bumbling, chosing the wrong moment to rescure them Ford...

sweet, hot fic, pity they don't actually get to do it... you should write a third part with nice comfort for Rodney...

[barkeep]

I'm beginning to wonder if Ford is doing this to them on purpose...
And I do have plans for a third part, actually. I can't just leave them all wound up like that, can I?
;->

[flatlanddan]

Tres sexy. I howled at the nipples!!

I am now so in the mood to jump my boyfriend thankyouverymuch :P

[barkeep]

Hope the jumping went well for you. ;-)
Glad you liked the story!

[rosewildeirish]

LOL. Poor guys.

Nicely done, though.

[barkeep]

They just can't catch a break, can they? *bg*
Thanks!

[resonant8]

The sauna! Hee! That made me laugh.

And somehow the idea of them sitting there and kissing, and not being able to do much other than kissing for fear of hurting Rodney's shoulder, kind of does something to me. I think I like limits a little too much.

[barkeep]

Glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you!