'Mischances Moping', or 'A Ship’s Commencing' by Hyperfocused (Coping Mechanism Challenge)

May 18, 2009 20:57

Title: Mischances Moping, or A Ship’s Commencing
Author: Hyperfocused
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: R
Wordcount: 5 things for two characters, in ten drabbles.
A/N: Denial, Avoidance, Repression, Substitution, Fantasy. An arrangement rearranged. Set against Outcast, The Shrine, and First Contact (but not necessarily in episodic order).

Mischances Moping, or A Ship's Commencing )

author: hyperfocused, challenge: coping mechanism

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looking4tarzan May 19 2009, 03:12:45 UTC
Oh john. You dork. Liked
this

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hyperfocused May 20 2009, 19:50:29 UTC
Glad you liked it. John is such a dork, but that's okay with Rodney.

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emrinalexander May 19 2009, 03:19:38 UTC
I really loved this - they're both so in character and complete dorks who finally get it right.

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hyperfocused May 20 2009, 19:51:14 UTC
Thank you! I love their perfect imperfection.

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elderwitty May 19 2009, 05:18:29 UTC
I liked the anagrams. Good job.

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hyperfocused May 20 2009, 19:52:20 UTC
Thank you! Good catch.

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kassrachel May 19 2009, 12:17:01 UTC
eeeeee! Oh, this is wonderful. I love how short and sharp these are, and the painful edges of their misunderstanding, and the way this plays out over time. These are honestly fabulous. OH BOYS YAY!

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hyperfocused May 20 2009, 19:53:57 UTC
Oh, yay for the eeee! I just want them to be happy and together, you know?

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hestia_lacey May 19 2009, 19:10:47 UTC
These were just lovely. The story that they tell is wonderful, but there were little parts that jumped out at me all throughout. Very well done!

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hyperfocused May 20 2009, 19:55:08 UTC
Thank you so much!

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