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Fruit of the Vine by elementalv (challenge: drunken/alcohol)

Apr 12, 2009 11:35

Title: Fruit of the Vine
Author: elementalv
Rating: PG
Notes: Gen, 775 words
Summary: Teyla was just fourteen the first time she overindulged in ruus wine.

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( Fruit of the Vine )

challenge: drunken/alcohol, author: elementalv

Comments 17

dragonladyk April 12 2009, 17:39:32 UTC

Wow. That's just amazing. That last line kills.

DragonLady

elementalv April 15 2009, 09:43:29 UTC

Thanks. I've always wondered what it would took to get Teyla to where she was when John first met her.

linziday April 12 2009, 18:00:18 UTC

Oh, this was excellent!!!!

elementalv April 15 2009, 09:43:43 UTC

Thank you!

accidentalfan April 12 2009, 23:02:40 UTC

Very nicely done. I love Charin's explanation of what makes one an adult. So very true.

elementalv April 15 2009, 09:44:05 UTC

At least Teyla listens. My niece? Not so much.

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elementalv April 15 2009, 09:44:14 UTC

Thanks.

ceitie April 13 2009, 04:06:32 UTC

Very interesting look at both the dangers of drunkenness in Pegasus and how Teyla grew up, how important it was for her to always take her responsibilities seriously.

elementalv April 15 2009, 09:44:56 UTC

She's so solemn most of the time. I doubt any of her lessons were easy.