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FIC: Breeding Ground by Mad Maudlin (PG-13) (Skeevy Ancients Challenge)

Mar 29, 2009 21:08

Title: Breeding Ground
Author: mad_maudlinRating: PG-13 ( Read more... )

author: mad_maudlin, challenge: skeevy ancients

Comments 19

loriel_eris March 29 2009, 16:48:01 UTC

Oh no! Oh guys! This is not good. I'm totally going to assume that everyone is rescued and it turns out right in the end. I don't think I could handle it otherwise!

Very awesome story.

mad_maudlin March 30 2009, 01:11:39 UTC

Thanks! Feel free to assume whatever you like about how it ends. ;-)

susnn March 29 2009, 17:07:52 UTC

So, if I assume that this is just the first installment of a longer story, will the next chapter magically appear?~~~~~~~~ wait~~~~~~~~~~ wait ~~~~~~~~ I can wait, as Penelope did wait. Where did I put my loom, again? :-)

Excellent, tense, and most of all, believable of the Ancients. Interesting that it was Rodney, of the artificial gene, doing the talking.

mad_maudlin March 30 2009, 01:15:07 UTC

Oh, dear. Twenty years might be how long I need to finish this.

I admit that Rodney does the talking because I just love writing Rodney on drugs...also, it raises the question of how the others are if he's the only one fit to receive company. :-)

jennytork March 29 2009, 17:08:09 UTC

Okay, whre is part two????

cinithea March 29 2009, 17:12:27 UTC

Oh wow! I liked that you did it from the pov of Elizabeth on Earth so we only have her perceptions. Great way to tell what's going on back in Atlantis without actually telling it.

goddess47 March 29 2009, 18:05:46 UTC

Oh.... oh.....

That is nicely done..... and more would be nice but I'm not so sure this is going to go well, so I'm not so sure I really want to see more.... ;-)

mad_maudlin March 30 2009, 01:16:58 UTC

Yeah, there's really no happy ending to this. But I'm glad you liked it!