Sometimes "Or" Isn't an Option by teh_bug (Amnesty '08, Fight or Flight Challenge)

Jan 08, 2009 15:45

Title: Sometimes "Or" Isn't an Option
Author:  teh_bug
Genre: gen
Rating: G
Summary: Run

Run )

author: teh_bug, challenge: fight or flight, amnesty 2008

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adafrog January 9 2009, 02:05:08 UTC
Wow. Well done.

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teh_bug January 9 2009, 04:09:05 UTC
Thank you! :)

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bratfarrar January 9 2009, 23:31:53 UTC
Oooh. Now I really want backstory. Or just more story exploring the situation.

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teh_bug January 11 2009, 19:08:05 UTC
Hee. Thanks. I'm really not sure where this came from, or what's going on, myself. I just really wanted to explore the overwhelming compulsion to run and it kinda went from there.

Although, in hindsight, I guess a better order would been, "come" lol

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sor_bet September 9 2009, 14:51:23 UTC
Ooh, no, "run" is perfect, it's what makes that last line so good -- did he run because he heard the command, or because he was running from the fight? (which doesn't seem like Sheppard, so again, what makes it so interesting. :-D)

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hajimebassaidai July 13 2010, 06:50:55 UTC
A wonderful idea and an incredible image!

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teh_bug July 14 2010, 03:52:16 UTC
Thank you so much! :-)

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