Saturday #2 by easilyexcited (Amnesty 2008, Backstory challenge)

[easilyexcited]

Title: Saturday #2
Author: easilyexcited
Pairing: John/OMC
Rating: NC-17 (sexual activity between consenting adolescents)
Wordcount: ~3500
Summary: Boarding school isn't what John expected.
Notes: PWP. Could someday be the second scene in a story about how John Sheppard became John Sheppard, but for now: PWP.

Comments

[easilyexcited]

Thanks for reading!

[bironic]

Very nice! Loved the realistic setup and confused, tumbling emotions, the visceral buildup of the scene. I love that John had this warm beginning with Ryan before having to bottle everything up.

[easilyexcited]

Thanks for the kind comment! I'd really like to think that John was once capable of emotional intimacy. I originally wanted to look at the progression of his relationships through his life, but that type of project would require more time than I can find right now.

[tzzzz]

That was really hot and also really sad. I can totally see this as part of John's backstory.

[easilyexcited]

Thank you for the kind comment!

[gaffsie]

I really like how hesitant John and Ryan were together that first time. It seemed very realistic yet sweet.

[easilyexcited]

I'm glad that you found it realistic. Thanks for reading!

[less_star]

Aw! (And um, hot! of course.) Poor little baby!John. Thanks for this, I've got a mild obsession with John/OMC fic, and this was very well done.

[easilyexcited]

Thanks so much for the kind comment! I've also got a bit of a thing for John/OMC, particularly past relationships. I love John/Rodney, but I mostly love John Sheppard, and I think his other relationships must have been at least as interesting as his current ones.