Coulda, Shoulda, Woulda by liketheriver (team challenge)

Nov 25, 2008 18:26


Title: Coulda, Shoulda, Woulda
Genre: Gen/team/h/c
Rating: T.
Word count: ~8000
Warning: None
Spoilers: Anything through Season 5 but nothing really
Author Notes: Thanks as always to Koschka for the beta and to Laryn for the idea that someone like Major Slater might exist.
Summary:  Caring for your injured CO isn't the easiest job for a Marine.  And ( Read more... )

author: liketheriver, challenge: team

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Coulda, shoulda, woulda b7_kerravon November 26 2008, 03:16:43 UTC
I love this! Even first-person OC, and he doesn't dominate the story. Excellent, as always.

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Re: Coulda, shoulda, woulda liketheriverrun November 26 2008, 06:11:55 UTC
Thank you so very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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syble4 November 26 2008, 03:22:25 UTC
Great story. I love the parallels between the teams. A team is a Team.

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liketheriverrun November 26 2008, 06:13:07 UTC
Thank you so much! It always seems like the other teams are little more than red shirts on the show, but I would like to think they would bond, too.

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liketheriverrun November 26 2008, 06:14:26 UTC
Thank you very much! I like to think that the other teams have bonded as much as Sheppard's team has. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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wildcat88 November 26 2008, 03:29:15 UTC
Yay team! I love the way you show Sheppard and his team through the eyes of someone else. Especially someone who could have been resentful but instead sees the positive side including his own team. Well done!

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liketheriverrun November 26 2008, 06:16:16 UTC
Thanks so very much! When Laryn made the suggestion a few months ago about someone had been bumped so John could join the expedition, I thought it was such a great idea and I've been waiting for a chance to get motived to write about him. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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skeddy_kat November 26 2008, 03:54:15 UTC
Absolutely lovely. I really enjoyed this.

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liketheriverrun November 26 2008, 06:16:46 UTC
Thank you so very much!

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