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Sings the Tune Without the Words by Ceitie (Team Challenge)

Nov 19, 2008 02:37

Title: Sings the Tune Without the Words
Author: ceitie
Rating: PG
Characters: Gen, Teyla
Spoilers: AU ending for Inquisition, 5x13
Words: 3155
Summary: On the third day, an emissary from the Coalition arrives in Atlantis and says, there has been a trial. And the accused have been found guilty, and they have been punished.Author's notes: This is possibly ( Read more... )

challenge: team, author: ceitie

Comments 25

vain_glorious November 19 2008, 17:15:06 UTC

This is quite interesting, especially for being based off of an episode (I thought) that was such a mess.

If you right more...I'll read it. :)

ceitie November 21 2008, 17:56:18 UTC

Thanks! I might write more, I'm just not sure yet.

lunabee34 November 21 2008, 01:34:52 UTC

This is really very, very cool.

So bleak and horrible and yet tempered by a strange sense of hope.

ceitie November 21 2008, 17:57:34 UTC

Thank you! Yep, hope is the one thing this punishment has that the other wouldn't have had.

ariadne83 November 23 2008, 19:58:38 UTC

This is really great. I agree with everyone who's impressed with mini!Teyla, and I'm of two minds about whether or not I want the expedition to find them. John and Rodney would be shipped back to Earth, for sure :-(

ceitie November 25 2008, 16:17:36 UTC

Thanks! Yeah, the expedition finding them at this point would be almost as bad as not finding them.

wraithfodder November 23 2008, 21:46:49 UTC

Oh, very cool. I liked it, and also wouldn't mind seeing more on it.

ceitie November 25 2008, 16:17:57 UTC

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

pogrebin November 25 2008, 11:28:59 UTC

This is really, really interesting-- a great tag to 'Inquisition' which was a terrible and lazy episode. I am so glad that you had Teyla speaking for them in your version-- it drove me insane that the Team did not all get a chance to speak, and that Teyla, who's their diplomat as well as being a Pegasus native doesn't get a chance to defend herself. And this is a creative and horrible and yet potentially hopeful punishment. I'm holding out hope because at least they're all together, and Atlantis isn't going to give up on looking for them...

The opening paragraphs describing these waiting rituals by those left behind when the Team go on missions is lovely.

ceitie November 25 2008, 16:19:52 UTC

Thank you very much! It pissed me off to no end when only John and Woolsey got to speak for Atlantis during the episode; they should have sent Teyla in right away.