“Valence Effects” by Kristen999 (Comfort Challenge)

[kristen999]

Title: “Valence Effects”
Author:Kristen999
Word Count: 4177
Rating: PG-13/ Gen
Characters: Rodney, Sheppard, Teyla, Ronon
Spoilers: None
Summary: Rodney should have picked up on the danger when the welcome committee of one greeted them.

Notes: Special thanks to mahoni. I took a tiny sliver from a dream she dicussed on her LJ and went wild with it.

Comments

[wraithfodder]

Aw, great piece, and that they saved Shep with good feelings!

[kristen999]

Heh...thank you. Blame Mahoni, I took her "The team loves Sheppard back to life" and went with it :-P

[vecturist]

Wow. That was equal parts creepy and sweet - not an easy combination. I have to add, the last couple of lines were wonderful.

[kristen999]

Thank you. I was a bit fearful of the odd combo but felt it served what I had in mind.

[berry_hearts]

Holy shit that blew me away. that easily could have been a kickass episode and, just wow. :D

[kristen999]

Wow! Thank you for such a lovely comment! Now that's an eppy I'd love to see!

[rhymer23]

Really nice! I really like stories when the viewpoint character's perceptions and reactions are skewed - when they're doing things that you as a reader knows are just wrong, and you're shouting at them to stop - so I really liked the first half. But then the ending... *happy sigh*. I love the idea of them saving Sheppard with feelings, and the visuals of that scene were just so lovely and moving.

[kristen999]

I took a chance with this. I took Mahoni's "The Team loves Sheppard back to life" line and wanted to make it happen. However, that was a lot harder to actually do plot wise than I thought! So a dash of creepiness, some crack, a lot of smish and this was the result.

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.

[tristen84]

*sighs contentedly* Wonderful. *smiles*

[kristen999]

Awww glad to have made you sigh. Thank you.