Maintaining Control by liketheriver (role reversal challenge)

[liketheriverrun]

 Title: Maintaining Control
Author:  liketheriver
Category: John/Rodney 
Word Count: ~ 4,300
Rating: T
Characters: John, Rodney, and a smidge of the others.
Spoilers: Anything through The Seed
A/N: Thanks as always to Koschka for the beta.
Summary: Just because you're in command doesn't mean you can control everything that happens.

Maintaining Control
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Comments

[liresius]

Oh great story! I loved the loss of control contrasts - perfect settings!

[liketheriverrun]

Thanks so very much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

[lizzypaul]

Dude, this was great! Hot, and IC, and I just love the whole thing to bits. Thanks for posting.

[liketheriverrun]

Thank you so much!

[argosy]

God, what a dilemma. Poor John. This was lovely.

[liketheriverrun]

Thanks! You know, I really felt bad about putting John in that dilemma seeing as he has a major thing about losing people, it was definitely a no win for him (but I'm holding out hope the two men were fed on by Wraith.)

[water_soter]

This time, no sense about you posting it, but I still loved every minute of it. Loved your story. John and Rodney are too cute for words. Great job and more, please!

[liketheriverrun]

Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it.

[piplover]

Oh, wow, that was wonderful! The tension in the beginning, and the way we're left hanging with John over whether or not the soldiers were alive or dead when the building went down is perfect.

You captured Woolsey's voice perfectly, I could picture it so clearly in my head it was like watching on TV.

And Rodney and John? SO hot!

Thank you for this!

[liketheriverrun]

Thank you very much! I've really comed to love the Woolsey character in the few eps he's been in (and to think I was so dreading him) but he really is fun to write because he does have that very distint cadance to his speech. I'm so glad it worked for you!