Speech Deprived by X-parrot (First Aid challenge)

[xparrot]

Title: Speech Deprived (~5,300 words)
Author: xparrot
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: PG (13 for a few words)
Notes: Last minute and ridiculously indulgent. Yes, I've batted three for three for CPR in my last three fics. Oops? Thanks to gnine for the title and the latest bad-thing-to-do-to-Rodney, and naye for the usual marvelous cheerleading (I am so spoiled!)

Comments

[grey853]

Cool story. I love the idea of Ronon and John breaking out of the cell to save Rodney. Poor guy has the worse trouble with his mouth getting him into trouble. But then, I can't think of a worse punishment for Rodney than not to be able to speak. *g*

[xparrot]

Hee, yes, his voice gets him in trouble, but he pays for it! Poor Rodney...

[tresa_cho]

Daawwwwwww. Loved it. Very in-character.

[xparrot]

Glad you enjoyed it!

[xparrot]

Thank you!

[lilyfarfalla]

Oh RODNEY, unable to think in silence, and taking it all the wrong way.

And this is perfect confessing-of-things John: his turn to be strangled. "Your voice. Everything you say. Listening to you. I miss it." asdakdsa!!!

[xparrot]

Thank you! Rodney's misunderstandings can be so sweet...and I do love John trying to confess, because you have to corner him to manage it...

[hazelthewitch]

I really enjoyed this. The jail scene was masterfully done, with all that John could and couldn't see and hear.

[xparrot]

Thank you! I'm so glad the jail scene work, action is always tricky...