12 Hours Later by orwhoeveriam (family challenge)

Apr 10, 2008 03:46

“Shut up, Rodney,” Sheppard ordered from the next bed, “You’re fine.”

“I’m not fine! I have a very delicate immune system; I’m very susceptible to infection. And the whole building was disgustingly dirty. And rusty. When was my last tetanus shot? What if Pegasus rust is different?” McKay’s eye widened as he spoke, a clear sign he was only getting ( Read more... )

author: orwhoeveriam, challenge: family

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orwhoeveriam April 10 2008, 12:05:03 UTC
yeah. sorry.
when i started it, i didn't expect to end like this.
it just.. did.

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alleonh April 11 2008, 00:17:53 UTC
*jaw drops* wow... starting with Rodney finally giving up onward to the end, that gave me chills. I think you tugged so hard on my heart strings that you might have broken them ;.;

Wonderful story *nods* I'm sure the show will have a happier outcome (at least, I hope so lol) but it's fun to wander down the darker trails of "what if" from time to time.

Welcome to the fandom btw ^_^

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orwhoeveriam April 11 2008, 02:08:46 UTC
aw, i didn't mean to break you. much.
:)
thanks.

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jaekayelle April 11 2008, 01:44:18 UTC
Yikes! Please tell me John didn't actually try to fly off the tower...

Very sad story, but engaging. John and Rodney are desperate and focussed. Kind of a scary combination for them.

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orwhoeveriam April 11 2008, 02:11:38 UTC
well....

thanks, i'm glad it was engaging, that's what i was going for. :)

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graffitiegg April 11 2008, 18:30:49 UTC
Oh, oh. Very engaging story; stoic, on the verge of breaking!John does it every time for me. :(

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