From Childhood's Hour--by Frostfire

May 02, 2005 22:11

In the settling dust, Major Sheppard’s hand lands on Rodney’s leg. “McKay?” It travels up, and Rodney’s too busy panicking about the cave-in to realize where it’s going, to notice exactly where his pants are ripped-

The hand freezes on his left thigh, skin against bare skin. “McKay. You okay?”

Breathe. In. Out. Panic attacks bad. ( Read more... )

challenge: bloody, author: frostfire

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like I said jic July 7 2005, 04:11:20 UTC
I really like this.

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laetitia_g June 6 2006, 20:16:50 UTC
The last sentence is perfect for such a snapshot. I liked it a LOT.

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hajimebassaidai June 10 2010, 17:08:24 UTC
A sensitive topic well handled.

That was the right place and a great way to stop. John doesn't need to say anything, just be there and not flinch away.

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