Second Chances by Lanna_Kitty

[lanna_kitty]

Title: Second chances
Author: Lanna_kitty
Category: Het, Sheppard/Weir
Characters: John, Elizabeth
Word Count: 7644
Summary: John gets a chance to make some changes
Spoilers: First-strike and all of s4, including speculation on the finale

Comments

[oparu]

duct tape! Ronan! "should have used the tape!"

"Do you want to die?"

So so so so so good. So much wondering and second guessing. John was amazing, you were spot on and he's so heroic, stubborn and frustrating at the same time.

I can see him picking the glass out of her skin and I love it.

So much self-sacrifice that it stays true to the feel of the episode without the nasty surprise at the end. Elizabeth would- John would- and THEY DIDN"t have too.

[lanna_kitty]

*hugs*

glad you liked it! :D :D

thanks for the sanity check on the first half of it!

[lanna_kitty]

:D woohoo! In character is good.
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

[anuna_81]

Yes! I loved it!!! I was on the edge of my seat during John and Elizabeth conversation, loved the bits and details like masks and bonsai, you brought so much life to the story. Love how you write John. Ronon and his remarks were perfect.

I usually hate time travel... you fixed that too!

[lanna_kitty]

heeheee. Glad you gave it a chance despite the time travel. but they practically *gave* it to me XD. glad you enjoyed the little details too!

[anuna_81]

Of course I gave it a chance - it's yours! *hugs you* And it was every bit awesome just like all of your stories are.

[xfairy1013]

Beautiful and very in character ♥ I wish the ep would have ended like this *sigh*

[lanna_kitty]

heh me too. Thank you!

[vickysg1]

This is so perfect. That should have happened. Definitely.

[lanna_kitty]

:D thank you for reading! yeah I think it's fun. reality is so overrated ;)