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Second Verse (Same as the First) by Friendshipper/Sholio

Feb 23, 2008 16:43

Title: Second Verse (Same as the First)
Author: friendshipper (Sholio)
Word Count: 3000
Rating: PG-13, gen(ish)
Characters: Teyla, John, a little of the rest of the team
Warning: Non-con(ish) situations. Dark. Issues with a capital "I".
Summary: "The Marines call it the Planet of the Willing Virgins, you know." It's the "willing" part that's debatable.
Notes: ( Read more... )

challenge: second verse, author: friendshipper

Comments 165

spuffyduds February 24 2008, 01:54:08 UTC

Oh. Ow. Wow.

sholio February 24 2008, 02:18:11 UTC

Thank you. *winces* I know!

jennytork February 24 2008, 02:34:59 UTC

Very powerful. Very well written.

Dark as hell, but very believable.

sholio February 24 2008, 02:39:57 UTC

Thank you very much!

The power disparity between the 'Lanteans and the other peoples in Pegasus is something I think about occasionally, but it's never addressed on the show.

teh_bug February 24 2008, 02:35:03 UTC

Oh, wow. That hurts.

sholio February 24 2008, 02:40:20 UTC

It's meant to (hopefully in a thinky way, not a bad way) -- and thanks!

zaganthi February 24 2008, 02:52:47 UTC

That's fantastic. It hit... just right.

sholio February 25 2008, 06:18:26 UTC

Thank you!

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Re: fuckity. sholio February 25 2008, 06:19:17 UTC

Thanks! That's ... pretty much what I was going for, actually, so it sounds like it worked.