Comments | sga_flashfic: On the Rocks (And I Mean Ice!) by X-parrot (f**king freezing challenge)

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On the Rocks (And I Mean Ice!) by X-parrot (f**king freezing challenge)

Jan 31, 2008 04:00

Title: On the Rocks (And I Mean Ice!)
Author: xparrot
Characters: Team gen
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 3,342
Warnings: General season 4 spoilers; not for those allergic to snuggling or completely cliché fluff.
Notes: Originally a drabble idea gnine and I shared, that expanded rather a lot. Title from Who Framed Roger Rabbit?, blame naye who told me it was funny to ( Read more... )

author: xparrot, challenge: f**king freezing

Comments 65

jadesfire January 30 2008, 19:50:23 UTC

This is just perfect. From the joking at the beginning, through the harrassment in the middle, and the ending's got me grinning like an idiot.

Oh, and Ronon's line about John being an autumn? Wonderful.

xparrot January 30 2008, 20:31:41 UTC

Heh - Ronon's line about autumn was totally him, I had nothing to do with it until Rodney said "winter" and there it was. (Ronon totally reads fashion mags. They were a gift from Heightmeyer to Teyla that Teyla politely stashed in her quarters rather than revealing her utter boredom by throwing them away, and then Ronon found them and was most fascinated.)

hth_the_first January 30 2008, 20:10:27 UTC

Oh, my God, this, THIS is the whole reason this challenge exists!!! This is so awesome -- Rodney's conviction that hypothermia is but moments away, John's weird touching issues, Ronon liking to get his picture taken and having no weird touching issues whatsoever, and yes, YES, they do need Teyla so very much! I could not possibly be happier right now -- thank you!!

xparrot January 30 2008, 20:33:24 UTC

Hee, thank you! The team is too terribly fun, even when they're Teyla-less and in deep trouble (or crevasses) for it.

whatshewrites January 30 2008, 20:21:01 UTC

The characters are so true in this. Nicely done.

xparrot January 30 2008, 20:33:48 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad it sounds like them!

goddess47 January 30 2008, 20:21:36 UTC

The problem with Pegasus was that between the space vampires and the renegade microbots, it could slip your mind that Mother Nature was also always out to get you.

So very true..... and cute.... nice!

xparrot January 30 2008, 20:34:19 UTC

Pegasus is a dangerous place to be no matter what! XD

grammarwoman January 30 2008, 20:29:13 UTC

Very cute, and what great banter!

xparrot January 30 2008, 20:34:51 UTC

Thank you! The banter writes itself, with these guys...