Exchanges by Jadesfire (Stuck On You Challenge)

[jadesfire]

Title: Exchanges
Author: jadesfire2808
Rating/Genre: G/Humor (I hope...)
Words: ~3,200 (all dialogue)
Characters: John and Rodney
Spoilers: None that I can see
Notes: With thanks to donutsweeper for help.

Summary: Are we nearly there yet?

Comments

[jadesfire]

I was really worried that it wouldn't work over the length of the story, but after that line came to me, I just had to write the whole thing.

Thanks! I'm so, so chuffed it sounded right :D

[x_erikah_x]

LOL! That was perfect John and Rodney!

[jadesfire]

*grin* Thanks!

[leesa_perrie]

"Not exactly, but then your hair probably makes a better antenna than mine."

And:

"No. I'll be fine. Just...keep talking, okay?"

"Not a problem."

"That's what I figured."

ROTFL!! This is a great fic, and just sooo John and Rodney! I love how they bicker - you've got it down just perfect!! Thanks for sharing!

[jadesfire]

I could absolutely hear them in my head, but I was a bit worried that it wouldn't make sense to anyone else. So yay! And thank you :D

[accidentalfan]

What a great fic! I loved how we had to suss out what was happening just through the dialogue. And it all sounded just like them. Also? Pretty darn funny.

[jadesfire]

I'm glad you could figure everything out!

Thanks :)

[jennytork]

It's great! sounds just like them and hilarious to boot!

I love the all-dialogue format.

[jadesfire]

Thank you :) I wasn't 100% sure about it, so it's good to know that it works!