Comments | sga_flashfic: Death by Fondue, by ameretrifle

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Death by Fondue, by ameretrifle

Nov 25, 2007 03:13

Death By Fondue

Category: Humor (verging on the crack), gen
Rating: PG to PG-13, language
Summary: With the advantage of hindsight, John realized that he probably should've known something was wrong the first time he'd noticed he hadn't seen Rodney for more than five minutes. But it's a party, he'd thought. He's probably out there having fun, he'd ( Read more... )

challenge: ways to die, author: ameretrifle

Comments 56

dovil November 25 2007, 08:55:51 UTC

This was just a whole bunch of bantering good times - thank you, it was fun to read! :)

ameretrifle November 26 2007, 05:14:11 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)

sholio November 25 2007, 10:14:51 UTC

That was hilarious! Your comic timing is excellent, and so many great one-liners that I can't quote them all. Loved the bickering among the locals ... and the Wraith drowned in cheese...

ameretrifle November 26 2007, 05:16:10 UTC

Oh, wow, thank you so much! For the life of me I can't remember where the cheese thing came from... I think it was sleep deprivation ^^ I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

aislinnrae November 25 2007, 13:07:01 UTC

["I think I gotta agree with the kid," said Ronon. "That is pretty awesome."] ---> I love Ronon xD

This entire thing was hilarious. Poor Rodney, though I must say I was quite impressed by the MacGyver-like spear and the improvisation with the Fondue Fountain. Shohesh rocked my socks with his story telling. You've done the characterisations brilliantly, btw. Poor Rodney. Poor, poor Rodney.

In the words of Shohesh: "That was awesome".
Much love and huggles ^^

ameretrifle November 26 2007, 05:21:21 UTC

Oh, yeah, I love Ronon too ^_^ And I still feel kind of new to SGA, so I'm so happy to hear that about the characterizations. Thank you so, so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

panisdead November 25 2007, 14:11:45 UTC

"Seriously, he'd like broken apart the bed and shattered the bedpan and it was like a spear, it totally hit him in the chest and he was all 'Argh!' and I was like 'Hah!' and whats-his-name was all 'eek, yeah, trying to run away now'."

*DYING*

ameretrifle November 26 2007, 05:26:09 UTC

*grins* I love that he can't remember Rodney's name. I'm sooo glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much! :D

Chell'nak! eliyes November 25 2007, 14:16:19 UTC

That was, dare I say it? Awesome. ;)
Rodney is a hero and he's all upset.

Re: Chell'nak! ameretrifle November 26 2007, 05:29:00 UTC

Yeah, it's been a long evening for Rodney, and it's gotta be the cherry on top that in all that time, no one had missed him-- but I think he'll be okay. Better than some other days in Pegasus. Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! ^_^