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Hustle by Zinnith, part 1 (Criminal challenge)

Oct 02, 2007 14:38

Title: Hustle
Category: Slash, AU
Word Count: ~ 14 700
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: John/Rodney, implied Ronon/Teyla
Warning: Violence, Kolya
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer: I own the clothes I’m wearing. That’s about it.
Author’s notes: This one sort of got away from me, hence the length. Title is shamelessly stolen from the BBC-show with the same name.

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challenge: criminal, artist: zinfic, author: zinfic

Comments 2

I haven't even started this yet, but... justalurkr October 6 2007, 12:59:45 UTC

...Rodney's expression in the banner tickles me silly. They all look great, but he really sells the "caper" aspect. Must read now. :D

korilian October 11 2007, 10:20:58 UTC

“Without the lemon juice of course, I’m deadly allergic to citrus."

There's a rule in writing that every word should advance the plot in some way, so when I saw that line I instantly started dreaming about John poisoning Rodney with citrus somewhere down the line to, I don't know, escape Kolya or something. Now it was probably just meant for character building, but that image still made my day.

Not as much as the possibility that Rodney totally SCAMMED John though! (with or without Ronon and Teyla, though I can totally buy into Teyla coming to him with a double cross first. Why else would he get into business with a small time crook like John after all.)

Now please excuse me while I clicky, clicky to part 2...