Hollow City by slybrarian (doppelganger challenge)

[slybrarian]

Title: Hollow City (Doppelganger Challenge)
Author: slybrarian
Pairing: Gen
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Summary: Even a City can feel sorrow.
Notes: Takes place during “Progeny.” Thanks to achae_ology for a beta.

Comments

[reen212000]

Ooh! Surprise! I really liked that you used The City. This is great!

[slybrarian]

Thanks! I'm pretty happy that I seem to have surprised everyone.

[seekergeek]

Very, very cool. Atlantis' doppleganger - very original. *applauds*

[slybrarian]

I'm really glad that everyone thinks this was cool. Thanks for reading!

[westdean]

Great challenge response - really original

[shallanelprin]

Wow. Great, well done story. I really like that you did the City and that it's from something that happened in cannon.

[slybrarian]

Thanks! I was originally thinking of doing something along the line of a RepliCarter, but then it hit me that the Asurans had already duplicated something.

[ceitie]

This is an awesome story, I never thought of the Replicator's Atlantis as being a doppelganger, but it works perfectly. I really liked the way you portrayed the City's thoughts and emotions as well.

[slybrarian]

I was trying to portray how the city didn't think and experience emotion quite like humans do, and that it's been around a long, long time. I'm glad to hear you think it worked out well, I wasn't sure myself.