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Scars, by Speranza

May 20, 2007 13:22

Title: Scars (1453 words)
Author: Speranza
Pairing: McShep
Excerpt: Rodney opened the door and didn't ask any stupid questions.

( Rodney's house was on Route 89 about forty miles north of Prescott, Arizona. )

challenge: scars, author: speranza

Comments 113

panisdead May 20 2007, 17:45:25 UTC

Cool! I like not knowing exactly what happened.

cesperanza May 21 2007, 04:11:31 UTC

*mumble* I had the idea that, like, the not knowing would be like the wound, and what we saw--the healing, the going on--would be sort of like the scar, so, er. It was this idea I had. Thank you for going along with me!

anatsuno May 21 2007, 12:59:05 UTC

The whole *waves hands* metaphorical wound/scar thing came across very clearly to me, so, yeah, mumbletymubleworks.

Also now I think someone should perhaps write wound/scar anthropomorfic, huh.

wildestranger May 20 2007, 17:47:52 UTC

I love the snippets of past in this, how we don't quite know what has happened but know that something has, and how we need to piece it together through John's particular brand and non-communication. And the way they comfort each other, and fit together when nothing else seems to - you write JohnandRodney in a most delightful way.

A very enjoyable read. :)

cesperanza May 21 2007, 04:12:40 UTC

Thank you!--yeah, it's a story about silence as much as anything, and it's nice to know that J&R fit even--or maybe especially--when they're NOT talking. YAY! \o/

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Re: Look! Weird spider things! cesperanza May 21 2007, 04:13:08 UTC

HUG HUG HUG HUG HUG HUG <3

anonymous May 20 2007, 17:50:47 UTC

♥

cesperanza May 21 2007, 04:13:31 UTC

*melts*

orangecombats May 20 2007, 18:11:11 UTC

Oh....just....

beautiful.

cesperanza May 21 2007, 04:13:55 UTC

Thank you SO VERY MUCH. YAY!